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On Command |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
May I, May I Have a drink Simple water in my throat Just and wrong Hand in hand Minor infraction Hand to hand Blackened white line And shady spots Pull some strings Mounted ready for what it will Pin straight explode around Conquest march of gold A defeating kind of road Gentle spring of crimson blood Spills and poors in alley ruts Disease of greed in rampant strut Politics and fingers crossed Phony papers treaty lost Blacked and whitened Ammended cost Psychos rage infant hault Sworn and bought infantry A little, more control them all Enter on eternity War and death at fair price Sons and brothers do the deeds May I, May I All is said On command We won and bled ____________________________________________ I havent shipped out yet. Im just feeling a little military tonight. a trickle of music from a well |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
May I, May I, the flagship of your poem. I liked it. Nice write. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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Lexia Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 111Nowhere |
Interesting. I liked it. Lexia You may only be one person to the world, but you may also be the world to one person. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
thanx guys. GIS |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Very interesting indeed. So political, and yet, still poetry. What a feat!  I much enjoyed this piece. Thanks for sharing.~Alicia~ |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I have no idea what to say.. twas good. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thanx guys. Im glad you found it entertaining. GIS |
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