Dark Poetry #3 |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
I came still in your mind time held and forever gone tangled messages for the strong tunnels of sorrow guide the weak don’t look for chasms, that taste of gold you lost those bright lights the turning grief the mourning song caress your longing starve the ending this bottled substance of distance and myth the abode, the meaning to exist musing mystic a desert of fools comforting time with all to lose The abode, the meaning they insist. a stone, for the ground and a prayer for the list. If nothing is something then everything is our thoughts and feelings and all that exists. [This message has been edited by mysticpoe (08-11-2003 05:17 PM).] |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Wow... adding this to the library.. it's special. |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Thanks Kaoru, did you read the poem presently posted, or the orginal un-edited version previously? Thanks for your help. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
i do agree with karou, i am adding this one as well...man, there was something mysticly (is that even a word, and if it is i know it is not spelled right) powerful about those words, i read it like five or six times...damn that was nice... "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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