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mysticpoe
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0 posted 2003-08-11 12:13 PM


I came
still in your mind
time held and forever gone
tangled messages for the strong
tunnels of sorrow
guide the weak

don’t look
for chasms,
that taste of gold
you lost those bright lights
the turning grief
the mourning song

caress your longing
starve the ending
this bottled substance
of distance and myth
the abode,
the meaning
to exist

musing mystic
a desert of fools
comforting time
with all to lose
The abode, the meaning
they insist.
a stone, for the ground
and a prayer
for the list.
  


If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

[This message has been edited by mysticpoe (08-11-2003 05:17 PM).]

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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
1 posted 2003-08-11 05:15 PM


Wow...

adding this to the library..

it's special.

mysticpoe
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2 posted 2003-08-12 09:18 AM


Thanks Kaoru, did you read the poem presently posted, or the orginal un-edited version previously? Thanks for your help.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

eor
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since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
3 posted 2003-08-15 12:15 PM


i do agree with karou, i am adding this one as well...man, there was something mysticly (is that even a word, and if it is i know it is not spelled right) powerful about those words, i read it like five or six times...damn that was nice...

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

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