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Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-08-11 02:30 AM

In heart lies,
an ancient place..

A rusted razorblade.

Stones collecting
thirst.
I will not be
your victim.

But I'll still
drown..

My sky bleeds
come home..

words I couldn't speak..

Drawn on a
canvas that is not quite
suited
for me.

I trained
your fingerprints upon me..

I moved them,
like the earth spins.

My spine incrimination..

I tried..
collection,
seperation..and anxiety fills
my cup halfway..

The other half, well..
we'll have to see
about that.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

1 posted 2003-08-11 04:17 PM

I am not sure why this doesn't have any responses yet...'cause it's damn good!

Susan

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

2 posted 2003-08-11 10:37 PM

Susan to answer your question..because it doesnt say roses are red..sigh..hey i'll mix them..F me ups..whickeycognacbrany rum..it bruns it burns so nicely

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

3 posted 2003-08-12 12:11 PM

I love reading your poetry. Its always awesome. Keep it up. Adding this one.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

4 posted 2003-08-12 09:21 AM

Nice write, I like the way you held the reader's hand all the way through. Like the finish.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

5 posted 2003-08-15 12:23 PM

really, i think we do see life the same, but you can express much better than my feeble mind..adding this one as well...

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

6 posted 2003-08-15 10:15 PM

Wow...your poetry never ceases to amaze me. You definitely have a way with words. Your poems are always beautiful...how do you do it?!?! Your writing style is EXACTLY how I wish mine could be. Excellent work, as always...!

"I would sleep forever, if it meant I'd never stop dreaming..."

22NICK22
Member

since 2003-05-29

Posts 54

7 posted 2003-08-15 11:33 PM

yeah

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

8 posted 2003-08-16 11:48 AM

We swear we won't be a victim, but our heart is too honest.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

bsquirrel

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since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

9 posted 2003-08-26 12:09 PM

So how come yr not fronting a great band?

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

10 posted 2003-08-26 07:58 PM

Meg,

Drawn on a
canvas that is not quite
suited
for me.

me neither
awesome stanza
xxoo

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