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green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2003-08-10 02:30 AM

A stretcher chain
And bloody reign
Tears by miss shes-gone-insane
Feel warm love vibrate my brain

Its only a hope
Even a dream
Maybe a wish
A nightmare obsene

She chases me
Her heart pounds fast
Blade in hand
My life the past

Giver of light and hope beyond
I lay in a hole blood filled pond
The daggers soft, oh so fond
A silver ring declares our bond
Of this memory fony and conned

Beat and pound my body bare
Trickle of blood
Her red lips smirk
Straps thick, a prison wall

You say its love
This feeling of want
Needed like a cigarette
On a death bed with envezema

Surrendered twitch of my spine
Lust and pleasing, pleased just fine

A hollow body only a shell
Victory slut dirty lips
Dictate and rule in hell
Violent shake, gentle sips
Another hole this woman rips

Oppinionated

So go away.

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-08-10 02:43 AM

Woah

I'm becoming a fan.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

2 posted 2003-08-10 03:11 AM

Thanx Kaoru. Im working on it.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

Lexia
Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 111
Nowhere

3 posted 2003-08-13 12:01 PM

quote:
Giver of light and hope beyond
I lay in a hole blood filled pond
The daggers soft, oh so fond
A silver ring declares our bond

I loved this part. Peaceful, yet ominous. Great work.

You may only be one person to the world, but you may also be the world to one person.

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

4 posted 2003-08-13 06:22 PM

I know that when I click to read your poem, I will never be disapointed. If its even possible it seems your getting better.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

5 posted 2003-08-13 09:40 PM

Thanx guys. Im loving the fact that you enjoy my poetry.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

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