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green_itchy_stuff
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0 posted 2003-08-10 01:38 AM



Fluent wind left my throat
And pointed words are what I spoke
Razor sharp to me redress
Gapping ouch remaining mess

Fake is fake and truth is not
Rubber tongue moves alot
Rip a scale and strike a chord
Music man and ego lord

The very best compulsive mind
Absent thoughts in rank and line
Bitter taste of what I do
Every phrase isnt true

Let this choice control my life
Ball and chain without a wife
Powder lead explosion here
Puking glory dying fear

Someone you dont want to find
Powered spirit unconfined
Alive until Gods to choose
Confine in life I refuse

Withered dry and emptied out
Dead I stare straight about
Hard and cold little crossed
All for pride my life was lost

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

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1 posted 2003-08-10 01:49 AM


damn, good stuff..

even with the rhyme scheme, it was great..

normally i wouldn't think so..but awesome,

green_itchy_stuff
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2 posted 2003-08-10 02:02 AM


Hey thanx.  I feel this way right now.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

SharaRose
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3 posted 2003-08-10 02:39 PM


But Itchy life is full of second chances, and then another, and another, and another. Keep on keepin' on. It's worth it! It will pass.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

green_itchy_stuff
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4 posted 2003-08-10 05:15 PM


yeah youre right i shouldnt be a quitter.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

Lexia
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5 posted 2003-08-10 06:48 PM


Very interesting. Good poem.

Lex

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6 posted 2003-08-11 12:56 PM


rubber tongue? now that is an amazin image you've penned...

very much enjoyed the plunge!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



green_itchy_stuff
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7 posted 2003-08-11 11:29 PM


Thanx you two.  Im glad you enjoyed it.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

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