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Dark Poetry #3

Hello, Goodbye

Lil OnE
Member

since 1999-12-14

Posts 234
Pasco County. Fl.

0 posted 2003-08-09 06:34 PM

Where's the navigator
of your destiny?
And where is
the dealer of this hand?
Who can explain
life and its frailty?
Cause there is nothing here
that I can understand.
You and I
have barely met
and I just don't want
to let go of you yet.

Eli, hello. Goodbye.
I'll see you on
the other side.
Eli, sweet child of mine.
I'll see you on
the other side.

And so I hold your
tiny hand in mine...
for the hardest thing
I've ever had to face.
Heaven calls for you
before it calls for me.
When you get there,
save me a place.
A place where I
can share your smile
and I can hold you
for more than just awhile.

Eli, hello. Goodbye.
I'll see you on
the other side.
Eli, sweet child of mine.
I'll see you on
the other side.

"No man is EVER worth my tears, and the only one who is will never make me cry"
~Lil OnE!~

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

1 posted 2003-08-09 07:27 PM

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

2 posted 2003-08-10 01:28 AM

so many questions, so few answers

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

3 posted 2003-08-10 03:05 AM

nice write. bad situations can lead to beautiful poetry or whatever other art you choose to express it with although the pain will still more than likely be there.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

4 posted 2003-08-10 05:10 AM

At first I thought you were talking about a woman but I think it is a child. So sad Maggie

Lil OnE
Member

since 1999-12-14

Posts 234
Pasco County. Fl.

5 posted 2003-08-12 01:49 PM

Yes, it's about the child that I lost. Definately a sad poem, but there is no beauty in it. Just the agonizing heart break of a miscarriage. Thanks for the replies, though.

"No man is EVER worth my tears, and the only one who is will never make me cry"
~Lil OnE!~

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