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Just. Once. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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This empty skin I swim within- turns shyness into stain... full moon sighs bleed compromise, ~clenching for the tame~ Gentle skinning of my sinnin' brings me plenty soil in palm, Freed from rising (rock defying) sing me ~sweet~ into your song... With heavy bliss in opened fist- I strike the eager dawn... Singe-ing praise in warmest blaze, Drip me softly inside wind-balm... Cringe not, within this Camelot- Just feed me to the sun- To taste the pun of failured grace My journey has begun... I blend. I bleed. I starve to feed. on you. just you. for once. |
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shytownboy Junior Member
since 2003-08-06
Posts 14Chicago |
Man you get so deep into your work. I wish I could just let go like that. Pure emotion put into words. You have real talent. |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
smile slingin that vernacular but the heat is the same these thin prison walls magic T |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I'm SOOO glad yer sharing this stuff with us again....You've still got it sister! Like being home, yanno? (btw? How's the rats?) Ed |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
I'm new on this forum but here goes. This is a very dramatic poem very well written. Gave me a shiver at times. Maggie |
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Felinus Junior Member
since 2003-08-06
Posts 20Princeton |
Wonderful, very introspective and self-referential. very well written |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Devina . . . hehe . . . love the singe-ing of this xxoo |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
All my love to ya peoples...I'm lovin my stay back and getting down some long overdue stuff! and wranxy? down to five darlin rats now but they seem to like the freagin condo/ summer home we built them out back!! lol my sibri...still got somethin? why thank you lovey...hoping to hang on fer a bit!! Still think we need to get a group together...(i'll be central in Cali and you all come out...) love you. Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... [This message has been edited by devina (08-11-2003 12:48 AM).] |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Your writing has grown much since I last read you Devina. This was impressive, indeed. Especially loved the ending. Hope all is well with you. Michael |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
I read this twice, then three, four X's. I like your lines a real lot. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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