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Dark Poetry #3

You're Gone

Lexia
Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 111
Nowhere

0 posted 2003-08-04 06:26 PM

You’re Gone

You’re gone
I can’t remember
Falling from grace
I’m so tired
Suppressed fears
The wounds won’t heal

You’re gone
I’m alone
Captivating feelings
My sanity disappeared
Time cannot erase
This constant pain

You’re gone
For so long
I lost everything
Good bye, my love
I will miss you
Because you’re gone

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

1 posted 2003-08-04 07:33 PM

the heartbreak of losing someone onced loved, it will pass, it all shall pass...great write

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

2 posted 2003-08-04 07:54 PM

no matter how much it feels like time will not erase your pain..it will. And its almost more empty when its gone. Nice piece. I liked how you repeatedly said: your gone. Like maybe you were trying to come grips with the reality of it.
~Lex

Lexia
Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 111
Nowhere

3 posted 2003-08-04 09:54 PM

Thanks eor and Lexy.

Dark Kisses
Member

since 2001-06-24

Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas

4 posted 2003-08-04 10:06 PM

Time does help heal wounds of the heart. Yet I do understand right now it hurts like crazy. Trust me, I am going through it now.

Great emotions written!

A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness.

Lexia
Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 111
Nowhere

5 posted 2003-08-04 10:09 PM

Thanks Dark Kisses. The pain is difficult. I wrote this a few months ago but it's still fairly fresh to me.

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