Dark Poetry #3 |
You're Gone |
Lexia Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 111Nowhere |
You’re Gone You’re gone I can’t remember Falling from grace I’m so tired Suppressed fears The wounds won’t heal You’re gone I’m alone Captivating feelings My sanity disappeared Time cannot erase This constant pain You’re gone For so long I lost everything Good bye, my love I will miss you Because you’re gone |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
the heartbreak of losing someone onced loved, it will pass, it all shall pass...great write "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
no matter how much it feels like time will not erase your pain..it will. And its almost more empty when its gone. Nice piece. I liked how you repeatedly said: your gone. Like maybe you were trying to come grips with the reality of it. ~Lex |
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Lexia Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 111Nowhere |
Thanks eor and Lexy. |
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Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas |
Time does help heal wounds of the heart. Yet I do understand right now it hurts like crazy. Trust me, I am going through it now. Great emotions written! A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness. |
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Lexia Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 111Nowhere |
Thanks Dark Kisses. The pain is difficult. I wrote this a few months ago but it's still fairly fresh to me. |
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