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suffocate the love... |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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nightmares cling to my thoughts gasping for life in the middle of the day rocking back and forth gotta shake the pain the impulses wishing i could suffocate the tears that are stuck within my throat you kissed me again lastnight funny how a dream could feel so real when you're never coming back how dare my subconscience haunt me with tantalizing droplets of emotion you whispered so softly "I love you.." in my ear i know it's the sweet intoxication of pain playing tricks on my fragile state of mind rocking back and forth submerging deep within the pain how *censor* naive can i be to even allow you to have control over me in my dreams rocking back and forth oh how i long to suffocate the love that is stuck between my nightmares and waking dreams... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (07-31-2003 12:22 PM).] |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Nicely done Kris. One of your best |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Dark and saddistic I liked it. |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
"wishing i could suffocate the tears that are stuck within my throat you kissed me again lastnight funny how a dream could feel so real" absoutly brillant!!!! lovely write!!!  "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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PointlesS Junior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 21Oconomowoc, Wisconsin |
quote: I really love that part... |
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