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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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gripped in vise head held captive white matter seeps to freedom [This message has been edited by Local Parasite (06-29-2003 06:31 PM).] |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
LOL  Me [This message has been edited by garysgirl (06-20-2003 04:26 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hey, Littleone, my above reply was about the little note to me. LOL You are a mess, you know? But, the poem...well, I think I might understand it? I just don't know for sure. Now, Gary...he would know exactly what you're talking about. He writes some Dark Poetry... but has to explain most of it to me. LOL But, I am learning, after moderating this couple of weeks here. I think, anyway. LOL Hugs Ethel (You know? It might do me some good to write some of "those" feelings about my past in this forum. You think?) |
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Forgotenandgone Member
since 2003-05-07
Posts 52NC |
I like your poem alot...haha its cool... _______________________________________ |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
pretty much sums it up |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thanks guys for reading this mess Ethel - no silly - I wrote that because I knew you would say, "Oh Sueee . . . " Which is a good thing - your doing wonderfully - trust me - a tough forum and lol - ssshh you cand hide in here too Posting dark sometimes gets rid of it Thanks for not pulliing it lol I am kidding - pullin ya leg xxoo |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
what a beautiful picture this created I loved it somewhere between Hannable & Cassino I've felt that pressure wished for release & only got ear wax just my luck - lol great write littlewing I love when you write dark . . . all that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream . . . |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thanks Dream . . . I dont post too much dark dark . . . xxoo |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Its good to see you in here! Very well done! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thanks Brad . . . I will learn a lot in here xxoo |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
enjoyed this taster of darkness...more please? |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I don't know if I've welcomed you in here or not..but Welcome to Dark. I always appreciate having the good poets in here to read for a while.  Enjoyed this feeling...can relate You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I liked the darkness. I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
 Great releaser!! Tima Some women wait for something to change and nothing does, so they change themselves. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Your poems pretty cool. I have an idea what your talking about, but at the same time you sould be talking about quite a few things. \ Its good. |
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xEmperorEmber Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 136tx |
LOL... hrmmmm.... eh.... i guess its not good to occupy this space by saying "No Comment" nice poem, i enjoyed the climax.... paul |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
littlewing is it ok if i make a copy of this and let my friends read it the more i think about it the cooller it is |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you Jenn for the welcome! Wind - thank you - I like that you like Tima - hahah - I would think so thank you Thanks green - well if you know what I am talking about - it has two sides to it Thank you Paul - haha the climax . . . green - of course you can - I am honored Thanks guys xxoo |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
short, sweet, but absolutly beautiful... |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
Very short. The images give me what is most likely a very wrong idea of what this poem is about hahaha. I like it none the less. Longer is not always better |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
eor - thank you - someday I really want to write dark beautifully Mad Hatter - hence your name and yes what a rather strange interpretation that I myself didnt see until you pointed it out Thanks guys xxoo |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
Yeah. Maybe Im just a pervert or something. It doesn't really matter though, I really like the poem and the simplicity and length does it so much justice. |
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