Dark Poetry #3 |
When Your Heart Turns Cold |
kadafi09 Member
since 2003-06-17
Posts 143California, United States |
When Your Heart Turns Cold You no longer care. Your soul feels withered and old. People fear your cold and hardened stare. A wall is erected around your heart. Nothing can pass through. Pain, joy, everything, becomes trivial to your heart. A baby's cry becomes nothing too. |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
I'd say that pretty well covers it... Well done. "Courage is most readily gained by the desire to avoid looking like a d***ed fool!" :P |
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Forgotenandgone Member
since 2003-05-07
Posts 52NC |
Good poem I like that whole wall thing good analigie....(i cant spell very well sorry...but you can sound it out).. |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
You seem to care about writing. Nice job here. mysticpoe |
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