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House of emptiness
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House of emptiness |
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Agi New Member
since 2003-06-17
Posts 6 |
Walking through the house of emptiness The loneliness created the picture of your image A person without a heart Has stolen my love and trapped me forever I shared tears of river in my heart, Hoping they will take me to you You didn’t see them; you didn’t find the treasure that was in me You walked through this empty house, as I wasn’t there Was it so hard to realize the meaning of me? To feel the pain coming out of my heart, The pain was my identity, my life, my love. I still walk around this empty house On the walls I see Paintings that I have painted through my life Oh God, I see my portrait on them, They are so cold, That is how my life was Cold and with no meaning I tried to brake through these walls, Hoping to find the freedom of my soul But I was tired, I couldn’t move Don’t say this is the end of our end I don’t want to cry forever I don’t want to let my heart sink deep into the ocean I don’t want to talk about it I just want to leave the anger behind Stay here and help me Take my hand and lets walk through the house of emptiness Let’s make this world ours Let me tell you that I love you as I have never loved before. |
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poet25 Junior Member
since 2003-06-17
Posts 18PE, Canada |
Very good poem, the pain could been seen I was able to notice it etched into the pattern of your words. keep up the good work |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Cold and with no meaning ... that's it I walk these halls of emptiness daily, so I know these words, they are written in my heart. M |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Welcome to Passions. This is a very good first post and I look forward to reading more of your poetry and your responses to our wonderful family of poets! Please check your e-mail for a special greeting. Ethel/garysgirl--Moderator/Passions in Poetry |
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Ladybug Member
since 2003-06-17
Posts 236Massachusetts |
Hi Agi, very well-written and emotional. Great job!  Every new beginning comes from some other beginning's end... |
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kadafi09 Member
since 2003-06-17
Posts 143California, United States |
a poem full of true and heartfelt emotions. it is evident that you felt this to your core. well done. |
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Agi New Member
since 2003-06-17
Posts 6 |
Hi everyone, thanks for your beautiful responses. It's a nice feeling when you find out that your poems are valued by the others. Now I seam to have more courage to write and express my feelings even more. Thank you.... |
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