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princessdani3122 Junior Member
since 2003-05-14
Posts 18 |
This are not poems like rhymes and stuff just more like venting. yellow I want to use yellow , cause it makes me feel happy ... even when I'm not. Maybe for just a moment I can hide behind the illision . Maybe it will seem real even to me ... Daddy In your voice theres so much hate, In your eyse so much pain . Is your heart so full of bitterness that its made you cold? You told me I was once precious to you , what changed it? I'm sorry daddy I had to grow up , I couldnt be your little girl forever. I'm sorry you lost so much daddy but I didnt choose it . I didnt choose for you to be an acholic or abusive. I didnt make momma leave YOU did , and both of you not just one took something precious from ME . Dont you think I'd give anything to be 4 agian listening to daddy's hands sitting in the rocking chair with you ... my father , my protector , my love ... my whole world. But I'm not , why cant I be precious to you now? I swear given the chance you would be to me . And dad that you hate grandaddy but no he's not the bad man you wish him to be. He's my rock , he has been since you left . He loves me so much , I could be 500lb's and dumb as a box of rocks and he'd still love me . But not you , never you and in my eyes that makes him a man other men should hope to be. All the hate that spews from you mouth wiill eat at your heart and soul , till its gone , dissolved into nothing. I just hope you can for once open your eyes and your heart before its too late . all my love , Danielle in a perfect world this would be sent to my dad and he would turn into a loving honest father. |
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princessdani3122 Junior Member
since 2003-05-14
Posts 18 |
And dad that you hate grandaddy but no he's not the bad man you wish him to be. *and dad i'm sorry that you hate grandaddy but no he's not the bad man you wish him to be .* sorry danielle |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
very good! seems like we both are in the same boat,as far as dads go. i wrote a poem about my father. its called dear daddy. go give it a read. anyhow good write hang in there. Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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princessdani3122 Junior Member
since 2003-05-14
Posts 18 |
how do i find it ?? |
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princessdani3122 Junior Member
since 2003-05-14
Posts 18 |
I found it , and it was very good it was like listening to my own thoughts when I read it . |
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Ladybug Member
since 2003-06-17
Posts 236Massachusetts |
Wow, there is so much pain and emotion in your words...I'm sorry for your situation. I, too, have written many poems about my father, but my situation is different from yours. My father disappeared without a word when I was 13, so I spent years (10 to be exact) trying to find him...luckily I did, but it was a long, hard road, especially for a teenaged girl. I hope he realizes how lucky he is to have a daughter like you, like you said -- before it is too late.  Every new beginning comes from some other beginning's end... |
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click1 Member
since 2003-03-25
Posts 152usa |
I try so hard to be a MAN and Father for my 6yr old daughter...yet I fail..not in her eyes but in mine..Thank you for letting me know how importent it is to stand tall.. Click |
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