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Lone Wolf |
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Zodikry New Member
since 2003-06-02
Posts 6 |
Lone Wolf The children laugh He sits and watches The children cry He sits and watches The children call to him Without a word he walks away The brighter the sun The less you will see him The darker the nigh Wider is the smile on his face No one know what he thinks No one sees the expression on his face No one can know the pain inside No one can ever walk along with him His story is his own He will go through life on the sideline And watch as other giggle their way along--Willingly He will lick a wound to help one heal But he would rather die then receive it in return He lays awake in his bed and cries The tears neither good nor bad He puts himself down So the others wont have to do it He will pass up happiness If it means he doesn’t have to be hurt He is a lone wolf Destined to be alone |
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laurie Member
since 2003-05-28
Posts 153canada, ontario |
you've captured my view on life so perfectly... why can't the people who don't hurt ever understand what its like to hurt, and not want to live any more? l love the way you told this... you've got a talent there, so... just make sure u keep writing, and if writings ur way to get rid of pain, good luck. you'll be ok. laurie. thanx for the read, it was goood... |
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a_hollowman Junior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 30Winnipeg, Manitoba, Canada |
nice read zodikry, really! anyways you seem to be pulling all the strings to get these things to sound great, keep it up. -- a hollowman |
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