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SgtMac
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0 posted 2003-05-19 07:40 PM


Which one? way down
Me and my
Never here, never here
Mind is where?
Rattletrap skin
Brown and brown
Die for dead
Whoosh warm for me
Clickety-clack boom
Static, static
Where'd you go?
Left to the hole
Shouldn't you see?
Nevermind
Who's to know?
Who says? They say
Why and why?

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1 posted 2003-05-20 01:42 AM


I must say it is a very unique piece. I am having a hard time placing some sort of image together.

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2 posted 2003-05-27 11:01 AM


nice
Brad Majors
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3 posted 2003-05-29 01:30 PM


unique
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