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teenpoet
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since 2001-10-17
Posts 280
Michigan

0 posted 2003-05-14 02:32 PM


I bleed...
Just like anyone else
it tastes bitter
much the same as anyone else
but I like the flavor
it tastes alive
and I like the color
scarlet and vibrant
and I like the warmth
as it flows through my skin
and I like to know
that I have it
'Cause then I guess it means
I really am alive
Just like everyone else

I don't know if today is a good day, or if yesterday was, or if tomorrow will be, but I'd like to think so.

© Copyright 2003 Alicia Adams - All Rights Reserved
tornskirt
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since 2003-03-30
Posts 87

1 posted 2003-05-14 04:08 PM


that's kind of creepy-- vampirish -- very good, i liked it a lot

never leave the light on if you don't want to be found

SparkleeLipGloss
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since 2003-05-18
Posts 19
Arizona, USA
2 posted 2003-05-18 01:05 AM


It reminds me of when I used to cut.. very deep.. I liked it
Yitzy
Junior Member
since 2003-05-12
Posts 30

3 posted 2003-05-18 02:36 AM


Whoa, powerful, dark stuff

ObeyYourGoldfish
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since 2003-05-18
Posts 12

4 posted 2003-05-18 08:41 PM


Very powerful words, bleeding is always a sign of being alive... I liked it.

You say Freak like it's a bad thing...
~Breah

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