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Leaches |
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teenpoet Member
since 2001-10-17
Posts 280Michigan |
Blood thirsty leaches steal away my thought and emotion and then I sit here staring blankly at the wall ahead of me It's like I'm not here I'm past the present and yet haven't touched the future there's this feeling inside me like complete peace mixed with desolation I understand every complexity and desire That anyone has ever known but through it I have learned nothing and know naught In these moments I don't accomplish anything yet feel as though I have the world is silent It doesn't penetrate through the haze in my mind My breathing is deep and relaxed I can feel it throughout my being my mind and body still as if frozen in time In one moment so complex so all consuming that rarely does it come upon me In the middle of a bright day I don't know if this is appropiate for this forum, if not I am sorry. [This message has been edited by teenpoet (05-07-2003 11:02 AM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
sounds like you are in limbo... M |
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SCREAMIN Member
since 2003-04-28
Posts 51US, Tx |
My head is spinning!! That totally twisted my mind. You've got a way with words. It's as if I could feel your emotion leaking out through the screen, and it drew me in. Truly, honestly, a work of art. Can't wait to read more of your poetry. |
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