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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY 
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INNOCENCE Where was I, when life was perceived simple? When innocence, was a smile with a dimple. Where everyday, felt like Saturday afternoon. Care-free and comfortable, far from any doom. Did I miss it somehow? Skip past it all? Fly to the future? Walk down the wrong hall? Did the sign say adulthood, the one I couldn't read? Did I choose the wrong path? Plant tha bad seed? Was it my actions, that turned it this way? Something I did? Something I failed to say? How did it all fall, on my tiny shoulders? A million little pebbles, rolled into the heaviest of boulders. "It's not my fault!" I try to convince, but there's no other explanation, for lost innocence!   ELMO "No man is EVER worth my tears, and the one who is, will never make me cry!" [This message has been edited by qtpieelmo (05-02-2003 05:43 PM).] |
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Musicmaker1969 
since 2000-06-25
Posts 589Peterborough, Ontario Canada |
Great poem. Sounds like you've been through the darkness a few times. I can totally relate. It is very well written and expressed. Sheri Jesus lives in my heart! |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Nicely done. I am impressed on how free flowing the piece is throughout. I enjoy how you let everything let go when you write. Great job. Tomer |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Nice poem. Something I can relate to. Here are the lines, I especially enjoyed. "A million little pebbles, rolled into the heaviest of boulders" |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Your words touched my heart and I am sure so many can relate. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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AlostHeart Member
since 2003-05-01
Posts 78Wisconsin, U.S. |
This is so good. :'( |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Thanx sooo much every1, for such wonderful replies!! I luv u all!!  ELMO "No man is EVER worth my tears, and the one who is, will never make me cry!" |
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