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0 posted 2003-05-01 04:55 AM



Lick the salt,
Tell me what you sense,
The skin of your sin-
Burning brightly red,

The pen of a poet,
Leaking souls forever,
The ink never runs out-
Devil, the supplier,

Scrap your nails-
For the maggots breed,
What once a child,
Infection leads,

The night of tomorrow,
Forever there,
For today you have seized,
Your timely prayer.


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1 posted 2003-05-01 11:48 AM


this is cool!
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2 posted 2003-05-02 04:25 PM


this is awesome! i love the rhyming
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Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
3 posted 2003-05-02 05:12 PM


WoW I luv the images you painted here!! Great Job!!


ELMO

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4 posted 2003-05-03 02:14 AM


Thanks for the positive response. I have not posted in this forum for a while.


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