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Dark Poetry #3
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Xeonox
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Welcome to round two,
Where all hell broke, lose,
I am now the one,
Who will show you some fun,

First, leave your soul,
At the steps,
With it you will find-
Only distress,

Enter with pain,
Leave insane,
That is the motto,
Hells’ lotto,

Smile and frown,
Your blood shall
Feed-
Demons indeed,

Fear and motion,
Ride the ocean,
Full of your kin-
A worthless breed,

Noooo!!!!!!!,
You cannot leave,
It is a one-way street,
With infinite repeat.
© Copyright 2003 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-04-29 02:17 PM

nice dark piece
Xeonox
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2 posted 2003-05-01 04:46 AM

Thanks Brad
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3 posted 2003-05-02 05:48 PM

WoW!! I luv this, the rhymes are great!! U definately have talent!!


ELMO

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4 posted 2003-05-02 07:04 PM

I can absolutely relate to this.  Great presentation!!!!!  It's worth a second read.

Just a Junkie
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