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StephyBob07 Junior Member
since 2003-04-18
Posts 37Texas |
Why is the grass greener on the other side? Afraid to place my foot there for i fear their dark words against me. This fence i build takes too much strength. But how i long for the eternal barrier. It grips my soul to see their light. It is now i realize that their grass is fake, my dirt is real. That is why they don't mix. That side I shall fear no more, With time my garden will grow, real and beautiful. Dreaming is the best thing you can do. |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Very well done! |
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Purple Poet On Wheels Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 145Pittsburgh/Edinboro, PA |
All the Stephanies I know bright and bubbly on the outside; Dark and brooding on the inside. You are now one of them Welcome [This message has been edited by Purple Poet On Wheels (04-19-2003 08:16 PM).] |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
...their grass is fake, my dirt is real... I LOVE that! Send us more! |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
WoW, this is such a beautiful piece, i love the metaphors!!   ELMO |
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karebear07 Member
since 2003-04-15
Posts 64Texas |
WOW!! Sometimes i wonder what happened to my real grass. Lovely poem. Keep it going!! love ya-kara <>< |
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