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MellonCollie
Member

since 2003-04-11

Posts 117
Austria,Europe

0 posted 2003-04-17 07:39 PM

nothing is alright
behind my eyes there is a war
and i can’t
can’t bear it anymore

if i hide from my feelings
will it be any better
if i hide from myself
would it even matter

left by anyone
forsaken I feel
i’ve felt too much
my wounds will never heal

hate myself
hate my feelings
hate my self-pity
hate my thoughts
for not being pretty

will i find peace
will i find salvation
will i ever feel fine
will i ever loose this frustration

how will i laugh tomorrow
when i can't even smile today

jaysh
Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 133
IL, USA

1 posted 2003-04-17 07:57 PM

wonderful write, I really liked it, its very easy to relate too, keep up the good work, I look forward to reading more poetry from you!

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

2 posted 2003-04-17 08:30 PM

I love this, I feel the same way at times!! So much hate towards yourself tho--You are a wonderful person, great heart, poems written beautifully portraying much feeling!! Keep on writing!! I love reading your stuff!!

ELMO

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

3 posted 2003-04-17 09:19 PM

MellonCollie...if you can learn not to hate, that's a start. Just a different way to view the world....

Black Swan
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 165
on the moon

4 posted 2003-04-17 09:35 PM

good write.very powerful, but please don't hate those emotions or certianly not yourself. Those feelings can be so overwhelming at times, I can understand that.
~Talia

MellonCollie
Member

since 2003-04-11

Posts 117
Austria,Europe

5 posted 2003-04-18 04:37 AM

Hey thanx a lot Black Swan, Kahlil, jaysh.
And thanx Elmo, I'm always glad to get replies from you

how will i laugh tomorrow
when i can't even smile today

tornskirt
Member

since 2003-03-30

Posts 87

6 posted 2003-04-19 11:11 AM

i really liked it. i enjoy all of your poems.

never leave the light on if you don't want to be found

MellonCollie
Member

since 2003-04-11

Posts 117
Austria,Europe

7 posted 2003-04-19 12:15 PM

Hey, thanx tornskirt...it'S always good to get replies like yours

how will i laugh tomorrow
when i can't even smile today

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2003-04-19 01:33 PM

MellonCollie~
Popped in to WELCOME you to Passions' circle of poets and friends~

Welcome ~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

MellonCollie
Member

since 2003-04-11

Posts 117
Austria,Europe

9 posted 2003-04-19 02:50 PM

Thanx for the nice welcome Marge Tindal

how will i laugh tomorrow
when i can't even smile today

tornskirt
Member

since 2003-03-30

Posts 87

10 posted 2003-04-19 08:13 PM

hey melloncollie -- thanks for YOUR note... keep up the great work --jessy

never leave the light on if you don't want to be found

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