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MellonCollie Member
since 2003-04-11
Posts 117Austria,Europe 
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nothing is alright behind my eyes there is a war and i can’t can’t bear it anymore if i hide from my feelings will it be any better if i hide from myself would it even matter left by anyone forsaken I feel i’ve felt too much my wounds will never heal hate myself hate my feelings hate my self-pity hate my thoughts for not being pretty will i find peace will i find salvation will i ever feel fine will i ever loose this frustration how will i laugh tomorrow |
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jaysh Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 133IL, USA |
wonderful write, I really liked it, its very easy to relate too, keep up the good work, I look forward to reading more poetry from you!  |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
I love this, I feel the same way at times!! So much hate towards yourself tho--You are a wonderful person, great heart, poems written beautifully portraying much feeling!! Keep on writing!! I love reading your stuff!!  ELMO |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
MellonCollie...if you can learn not to hate, that's a start. Just a different way to view the world.... |
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Black Swan Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165on the moon |
good write.very powerful, but please don't hate those emotions or certianly not yourself. Those feelings can be so overwhelming at times, I can understand that. ~Talia |
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MellonCollie Member
since 2003-04-11
Posts 117Austria,Europe |
Hey thanx a lot Black Swan, Kahlil, jaysh. And thanx Elmo, I'm always glad to get replies from you  how will i laugh tomorrow |
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tornskirt Member
since 2003-03-30
Posts 87 |
i really liked it. i enjoy all of your poems. never leave the light on if you don't want to be found |
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MellonCollie Member
since 2003-04-11
Posts 117Austria,Europe |
Hey, thanx tornskirt...it'S always good to get replies like yours how will i laugh tomorrow |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MellonCollie~ Popped in to WELCOME you to Passions' circle of poets and friends~ Welcome ~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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MellonCollie Member
since 2003-04-11
Posts 117Austria,Europe |
Thanx for the nice welcome Marge Tindal  how will i laugh tomorrow |
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tornskirt Member
since 2003-03-30
Posts 87 |
hey melloncollie -- thanks for YOUR note... keep up the great work --jessy never leave the light on if you don't want to be found |
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