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My Heart and Soul
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My Heart and Soul |
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OpaqueView New Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 9North Carolina |
My Heart and Soul She handles the knife, thinking about her misery and unbearable strife. Thinking about her reputation that she conveys, the shameful image she portrays. Wanting to ease the pain, she slices away at her arm. Feeling that she is doing more good then harm, she goes deeper, slower, and prolongs the pain. Shes already used to the feeling, why not experience it again? She slits along the middle of her torso, in a fierce uncontrollable rage. Fondling the incision with a smile of contentment, she prys open her rib cage. Peering resentfully at her stillbeating heart, she ripped it out and the restitution began. She stabbed it once for letting her down in a time of need, it settled her burning sensation, to see her heart bleed. She reached into herself and pulled out her soul, she resented it with a vengance, for being so weak and confused. "If you were any stronger, I would not have been bruised, I would not have been abused." "I had to end my existence, and stop my misery, I blame you, my heart and soul, for putting me through this agony." With those words said she closed her eyes, there was much content in her dying. There was no sense in her existence...or even put a foot forth trying. RiP to my Heart and Soul P.Angel 3/21/03 |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
First of all, Welcome to Passions!! And second... That was unbelieveable! I can't express to you how much I felt every single word of that piece. You are a great poet and I certainly hope to see more of your work. The way you portrayed the pain and agony leaves me speechless. I felt this much.... ~Jessa |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Awe, this is so dark & sad, beautifully written!!  I think this would be easier to read if it was typed out in lines tho!! Either way it brought tears to my eyes!! Hope to see more of your talent soon!!! ELMO |
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OpaqueView New Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 9North Carolina |
Aww well thank u guys...thanks for the suggestion. Very helpful... P.Angel |
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IcyFlamez89 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 292Jersey City NJ |
Fullest symapthy to that person, however, forum rules don't allows poems of self harm or any violence like cutting. Great as this poems is, it might be removed... [This message has been edited by IcyFlamez89 (04-17-2003 11:44 PM).] |
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OpaqueView New Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 9North Carolina |
thats fine... |
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tornskirt Member
since 2003-03-30
Posts 87 |
absolutely amazing. keep it up...  never leave the light on if you don't want to be found |
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