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Black Swan
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since 2003-02-05
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0 posted 2003-04-14 01:56 AM


My placement in this world
seems to so pathetic
I strive to forget it
sometimes it holds me back
I kill the realtionsips
and love i wish i had
I always end up alone
but now im wondering
if its all my fault
did I sabotage myself
thinking of that fact
gets me sinking
farther and farther down
with no hands to hold
and no light to see
if someone was
trying to help me
swirling truths
too many to choose from
too many people sending
mixed messages
I want life to be simple
I want life to be ready
for me

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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2003-04-14 09:50 AM


I can SO relate to this'n. Sooner or later, I think it dawns on us all that often, the only common denominator in our failed relationships is ourselves. Always an eye opener.

Enjoyed. I Don't believe I have welcomed you to Passions yet, so...WELCOME!

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Georgia
2 posted 2003-04-14 05:11 PM


well done!
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