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Dark Poetry #3

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moshpit
Member

since 1999-11-25

Posts 143
cebu, philippines

0 posted 2001-02-21 06:14 AM

My guitar has six strings
But I only have four lives
One for Mother Land
One for the Father
And another for Myself.
The last one--lost
In the blindness
Of your affection.

Ginners
Member

since 2000-07-22

Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey

1 posted 2001-02-21 02:35 PM

I really liked this. it was short, but i think it said a lot

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

2 posted 2001-02-21 03:35 PM

Great ending!!!

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)

NC
Member

since 2001-02-20

Posts 89

3 posted 2001-02-22 12:09 PM

yes, this one does say a lot
short and to the point

dragonpoe
Senior Member

since 2000-11-12

Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida

4 posted 2001-02-22 02:14 PM

short but great! what's that old saying? "less is more." this proves that point. Well done.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

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