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Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

0 posted 2003-04-07 12:27 PM

                  Minion of darkness feed
                   on twisted sadist desire
                   on many a dim lit eve

                   I feel the darknes
                   thick
                   probing inside
                   violating

                   The voices once imagined
                   silent
                   now scream
                   in rage
                   breaking dilluted fantasy
                   and daydream

                   Feel the chill crawling up
                   your spine
                   the hair standing up
                   as night wind blows

                   Your fear
                   feeds
                   your prison
                   locked inside your mind
                   afraid of the deamons
                   that may lurk
                   just outside

                   When did the sun die?
                   Good and evil
                   once dichotomy
                   now in bed
                   with blasmpemous throes
                   of ectasy
                   spawning infants
                   of ingnorrance to plague
                   shallow minds

                   As I walk the night
                   I see things I shouldn't see
                   but as day comes
                   I realize they neve leave
                   only run to shadow
                   behing my vacant eyes.

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

1 posted 2003-04-07 03:44 PM

Wow!! This gave me chills!! Beautufully written!!

ELMO

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

2 posted 2003-04-07 10:36 PM

thank you

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

3 posted 2003-04-10 10:26 AM

Hi Brad, this poem brought me on a journey that we all are a part of, but few wish to see. Your last stanza is especially captivating. You can go deep! Enjoyed, very much.

mysticpoe

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

4 posted 2003-04-10 12:06 PM

Good poem, very well written. I lke the little haiku in as the first stanza. Whether or not it was intentionally done or not, I still like it.
Jenni

You are what you make yourself to be.

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

5 posted 2003-04-10 12:35 PM

thank you

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