Dark Poetry #3 |
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Seraphine_CoB Junior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 14LONDON, UK |
In a risky November's coming The point of our lives beginning. The domain that you built To halt my hurt, my not-growing. You would drive your pen, And bore deep your contention Insistent of the future- And the distance of years Should our shelter be un-done? Sometimes you would love to play, The chords never woke me And I would sleep in my bed, You built it for me, apart From outside indifference. Sewn with little lights, Fraught with things, a wreath some lace - A canopy of dresses, hanging Spectators to this our preserve. Flowers and twigs, stones and leaves, Things I had chosen for their shape. Or colour, However meaningless. Climbing the iron. Your little bird, this my cage. Your Wendy-bird. Here to be your mother, wife, lover, To not discover adulthood. Gloss-black-jackdaw, guarding trinkets. You would often film me sleeping, Through the clutter, light allowing. If not then, always without my knowing. Painted like ice, kimono neat. Obsessed in severe perfection, Even in my dreams, (you knew with ease) You labelled and kept these volumes, Spine out, code marked, shelved tight, Your archived possession, by date. Never to be watched, never to be touched My voyeur. To the day- It was your piece forever captured. The peace of me, you took away. |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
one of the best and most complex pieces i have read in a while on the net. my vote and adulations. -majnu |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A smashing write.. absolutely fantastic, the imagery, gosh the imagery. I love it! YOU have my vote. plus adding this to my library. [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (04-03-2003 05:28 AM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Seraphine, the imgery here is fantastic, sweet friend, you have my utmost appluase and dear vote, God Bless You, I love the abstract, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seraphine, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
So awesome! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Wonderful and interesting write!!!! Well Done!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Flower Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 240California |
Interesting and awesome. Thoroughly enjoyed this and i have voted. Love reading all these great writes. |
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