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singular_one
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since 2003-03-05
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0 posted 2003-04-01 02:13 AM

COSMIC ICE


People laughing, talking loud
I am lost within the crowd
Happiness can’t last for long
Something always can go wrong

So I’m standing peacefully
When my dreams get suddenly
Buried, before I realize,
Under million tons of ice

Sun is shining in my face
I feel sorrow and disgrace
Now it’s time, or so it seams,
To say goodbye to frozen dreams
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Eromyna
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since 2002-11-29
Posts 306
Pheonix, AZ, USA
1 posted 2003-04-01 11:01 AM

I like. Very powerful ending.

"I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation."
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