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Desire Speaks |
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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
I want you suffer I want you naked Just like no other can, how you fake it I want you make me Reach down and take it For no mistake see Thats when I break it I am I am your man tonight I will I can't become tonight You see, but you know not Your sight I am I am your man tonight I want you sustain I want you reveal Your heart a black stain In all that you feel And I need you tell me Who's this you cry for These lies they sell me These lies you die for Cursing the darkness at your door Falling to scabbed knees on your floor You pray, but you know not What for Cursing the darkness at your door I am I am your man tonight I will I can't become tonight You see, but you know not Your sight I am I am your man tonight |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done here wobbley!!!! I liked this a lot. Geesh I wish I could write like you!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Good poem! Well done! Write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
Dopey--->Thanks for reading and commenting I can always count on good praise from you! Kethry--->Thank you for the responce! Write on, I shall!  |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Great work of poetic feelings. I enjoyed the read. I will be looking for more of your work. Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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