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Dream
Junior Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 10


0 posted 2003-03-16 10:35 PM


I composed from midnight
A haunting melody
Of a crimson violin
And heard the mocking laughter of
A dead child

I painted in blood
A nightmare’s portrait
On gore-flecked canvas
And espied the eternal weeping of
A broken dream

I carved from ice
A chimerical statue
Of arctic chill
And felt the solitude of
A winter queen

I dredged from corpses
A vampiric cuisine
Of rot and filth
And dined upon the blood of
A savior’s body

I separated from carrion
A warrior perfume
Of blood and steel
And perceived the essence of
A fallen lord

I tore from myself
A tattered shred
Of a poet’s soul
And kissed the Angels of
Sin
-The Angels of Sin


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Jason Lyle
Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438
With my darkling
1 posted 2003-03-17 11:45 AM


welcome to the forums, nice write.
Jason

WisprWnd
Junior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 34

2 posted 2003-03-17 01:18 PM


That's gooooood. You should stay and write more. Yesssssss... we read them all, we do.
Always tell you what we thinkssss, yesssss.

                         WisprWnd.


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Purple Poet On Wheels
Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 145
Pittsburgh/Edinboro, PA
3 posted 2003-03-20 07:16 PM


AMAZING
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