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Armageddon |
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singular_one Junior Member
since 2003-03-05
Posts 14 |
ARMAGEDDON How long I'll be able to suppress my rage... How long I'll be able to suppress my rage... How long I'll be able to suppress my rage... I'M LOCKED IN THIS WORLD LIKE BEAST IN A CAGE!!! I never thought it would be so hard To summon the forces that will destroy God I really should stop and think about this Am I ready to open the door to abyss I'm thinking while looking at the world from above... I'm thinking while looking at the world from above... I'm thinking while looking at the world from above... IF ONLY GOD HADN'T REFUSED MY LOVE!!! Those who survive will replace God The others will fall and bathe in mud The ticket to come is your personality Welcome to my brand new reality Sacrifice your individuality... Sacrifice your individuality... Sacrifice your individuality... JOIN ME IN MY QUEST FOR INSANITY!!! I will draw my strength from my despair I'm driving to hell and soon I'll be there I will bring the worse things you'll ever see God really shouldn't have mess with me Nothing will stop you if you surrender your will... Nothing will stop you if you surrender your will... Nothing will stop you if you surrender your will... NOTHING WILL STOP YOU IF YOU HAVE COURAGE TO KILL!!! The monster with million heads has awaken Gates of hell are open and the sky has been taken World wrapped in a barbed wire It's the result of my desire |
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just a junkie Member
since 2003-03-04
Posts 53 |
This is great....I read it 3 times! Just a Junkie |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
usually I don't like too many lines get repeated...but yours create a striking image in my mind! ~Every girl has a dream within. |
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gpc Junior Member
since 2003-03-01
Posts 43 |
personally i think that this would make a better metal song than a poem but i do see the point of the repetition. i see it as a kind if building of tention which would exist between sides of a war. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 Wow, this is very powerful and serious, dearest freind, I agree this would make a great heavy rock song, it would work well with a Rage Against The Machine-esque sound! (big hugggssssss) Very striking, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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singular_one Junior Member
since 2003-03-05
Posts 14 |
Thanks for the replies  . Well, actually I wrote it as a heavy metal song lyrics. Even more, I wrote it having a Rage Against The Machine's song Killing In The Name in mind.Is it OK to post (dark) song lyrics here? |
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just a junkie Member
since 2003-03-04
Posts 53 |
I'm back to this one again. I had to vote for it this time. Thanks Just a Junkie |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ah, heavy metal you say, well I am open to the change of times, and enjoyed the read. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
It would definately work as heavy metal lyrics. |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
I voted on this after reading it several times. |
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Sikanda Member
since 2002-10-08
Posts 54 |
wow this is really powerful.... agreed I think it would make a great heavy metal song! ~anna |
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SilentFreija Junior Member
since 2003-03-30
Posts 37 |
me being someone who's obsessed with heavy metal loved it! I LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT! I'm ur biggest fan now! You should whip out an electric guitar and make it compleate! IF YOU DON'T I WILL! MUAHAHA! I loved it! Keep up the good work for your biggest fan! Where you look for broken hearts...you'll find me... |
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singular_one Junior Member
since 2003-03-05
Posts 14 |
Thanks for all replies .SilentFreija: your post is the most positive comment on my lyrics so far. Now I feel that writing that wasn't a complete waste of my time. |
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edh Member
since 2003-03-26
Posts 111 |
I met an Armageddon man walking down an Armageddon street. Somehow with his eyes he told me words he could not speak. I met a walkie-talkie boy and a walkie talkie girl who were sentenced to live in a walkie-talkie world. I to hope the world is ready because God knows I am. |
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