Dark Poetry #3 |
Tuesday's Girl |
G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Everyday it seems the same I do my job and play the game But Tuesdays I see something more When she passes by my door I find my mind lost in a whirl While I think of Tuesday's girl It's not that very clear to me But I believe her name to be Shelby I could be wrong and out of luck But that's the name found on her truck She simply seems to be a pearl The one I call just Tuesday's girl I really think she is so cute All dressed up in her business suit To me she always lends a smile And says hello with class and style Then I feel my stress unfurl As I say hi to Tuesday's girl I'll put my thoughts down in this rhyme 'Cause I don't see her all the time But she sees me which is so cool To ignore that fact I'd be a fool So I'll write some words and make them swirl All for one sweet Tuesday's girl Now in the end I'd like to say How it's so nice to start the day With a smile and a wave While I'm working like a slave I find my thoughts begin to twirl All around her, Tuesday's girl G. A. Webb Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
I really like this. I know how you feel. Good work. |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
mirror man: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. Good luck on your "Tuesday's girl". :-) G Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
wondeful write i enjoyed this so much and i liked the title and the whole tuesday thing great idea. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Someone to spice up Tuesdays...how nice...James |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow nicely done here.......see I wouldn't have a T-day girl cuz i woulda made my move already. I think you should to. Talk to her! Nicely done here. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Ginners: Thanks bud! I thought it was an interesting concept when it came to me, so I went with it. At first I didn't think anybody in dakr #3 was going to like it. But I post everything here, so like it or not...here it is. Thanks again! :- JamesMichael: Ya, when I do see her it sure makes for a more interesting day. Thanks! :- Dopey_Dope: Don't count me out yet big guy, for nothing is beyond my grasp...lol! See ya dude! :- G Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Could be that the temporary could become permanent, it wouldn't be the first time it ever happened. Nice read. |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
Heh ... Really interesting work u have here. What a lucky girl! *sighs* |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Haha......yea......that's the way to see it pal!!! You go get her, and once you got her..............well......I think you know what to do next!!! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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