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Dark Poetry #3

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Fariegirl
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 147

0 posted 2003-02-28 08:55 PM

I feel something in the pit of my stumach,
It is pulling me into darkness,
I hang with "The Wrong Crowds",
Now black is peace,
I hope this won't last.

Lisa_bebe15
Member

since 2001-11-15

Posts 151
Florida

1 posted 2003-02-28 10:19 PM

I've thought of turning to the wrong crowds, and wearing black and stuff, it wont solve my problems..
Lisa Ann

"Water Over Matter"

Fariegirl
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 147

2 posted 2003-03-01 12:20 PM

thanks lisa, I hang with both kinds of crowds.

JP
Senior Member

since 1999-05-25

Posts 1343
Loomis, CA

3 posted 2003-03-01 09:18 PM

I've read most of your work and was wondering if you thought of putting some of your shorter poems together? I've felt a thread continuing in the 'no title' works and I think they may a wonderful free verse if combined. Just a thought.

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
Nil Desperandum, Fata viem invenient

Fariegirl
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 147

4 posted 2003-03-01 09:32 PM

JP, thank you so much, I would be delited for anyone to do anything with my work. I just like to be heard. thanks again.
Fariegirl

JP
Senior Member

since 1999-05-25

Posts 1343
Loomis, CA

5 posted 2003-03-01 09:56 PM

you can email me if you'd like, I may not be the most learned of poets here but I see a lot of potential in your work and would love to give you any advice I can - and I am a good person to talk to if you just need to chat.

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
Nil Desperandum, Fata viem invenient

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