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MissKlarmic Member
since 2003-02-20
Posts 70Canada,N.S 
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The hurt i feel seems to reappear whenever people are near. These tears i cry seem one step closer to the deaths im about to die The thoughts in my head of love of life of all the more reasons to be mislead The friends im loosing to time to broken hearts the closing The love passing through me by the cold dampness of the home The hearts im breaking with every word, th elivesim breaking with the touch, my own i seem to be slowly taking. The thoughts that make me weep , loose all my sleep digging deep for the emotional bar set to high. To meet my fears would be an option, To run scared a tried and untrue fact.To see these thoughts these words in my eyes alls seen by me Is a miserable little girl lost in despise. |
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j0n4th4n Member
since 2003-03-11
Posts 94 |
i hope you are alright your poem is difficult to understand and read, partly because there are some typing errors but it sounds mature enough try re-writing it, with shorter lines i wish you happiness and peace  |
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