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Dark Poetry #3

Shroud Of Dark

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2003-02-09 02:54 PM

This shroud of dark
upon my thoughts,
this shadow that your love
has brought,
it's taken all the light,
ripped it from my sight,
and left a blackened vision cruel
upon my fragile mind.

WhiteRose 2/08/03

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

1 posted 2003-02-09 03:19 PM

Well said Ms Rose although sad.

Hope you're ok.

grunge messiah
New Member

since 2003-02-10

Posts 2
ky usa

2 posted 2003-02-10 02:49 PM

pretty cool. i really like it a lot

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

3 posted 2003-02-10 08:53 PM

Interesting piece. Sad, hope you are really not this sad.

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

4 posted 2003-02-11 11:12 AM

Nice imagery, you managed to make me sad also.

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

5 posted 2003-02-12 09:57 PM

I find it's so easy to be rendered bitter so difficult to mend...try to bury that shroud
quickly

[This message has been edited by ecrivan (02-12-2003 09:58 PM).]

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