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Dark Poetry #3

Feathery Fluffiness

WisprWnd
Junior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 34

0 posted 2003-02-07 09:13 PM

I, in my battle with god have only one clear revelation. My fingers are broken, but thats not it. My heart is on fire with fight, but thats not it. My lover lies victim to "Him", yet thats not what I wish to see. He knows what I know... That is why he stopped the fight.. That is why he, at this very moment, flies to his heavenly abode.
God has fear, but this is not what I learned...
Do you want to know?

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

1 posted 2003-02-12 01:25 PM

Intersting piece. The phrasing threw me abit but I still enjoyed it.

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

2 posted 2003-02-16 08:21 PM

Welcome to Passions.

Your prose poem was really refreshing. The use of rhetoric was nice in the way it built up to an actual question.

I look forward to reading more of your poetry and your responses to our wonderful family of poets! (Please check your e-mail for a special greeting.)

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

3 posted 2003-02-17 09:36 AM

Welcome to Dark Passions, here, we explore, we seek, we find, and we ask.

It is hoped that you will enjoy your time with us.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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