Dark Poetry #3 |
My Crazy Self. |
lorenlynn Member
since 2003-01-27
Posts 203California Beaches |
Dark sad place I alone own. I race the track All day long, Short of breath, Short of life. I live My Crazy Self, Mean and angry Such coldness holds me. I hurt those I once loved, My selfish life. I was a little girl With big dreams And tender heart, But my shining smile Was stolen, Then, Hardness. Now? Now, I play with the devil, Losing my faith, Giving up my soul. [This message has been edited by lorenlynn (02-02-2003 04:30 AM).] |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
This is good! |
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P.R.C Junior Member
since 2003-01-31
Posts 40Hull, England |
thats great, i like it |
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we'llfloat New Member
since 2003-01-23
Posts 2 |
I enjoyed this poem immensely. |
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lorenlynn Member
since 2003-01-27
Posts 203California Beaches |
I appreciate your comments very much. Thank you. |
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