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lorenlynn
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since 2003-01-27
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California Beaches

0 posted 2003-02-02 01:38 AM



Dark sad place
I alone own.
I race the track
All day long,
Short of breath,
Short of life.
I live
My Crazy Self,
Mean and angry
Such coldness holds me.
I hurt those
I once loved,
My selfish life.
I was a little girl
With big dreams
And tender heart,
But my shining smile
Was stolen,
Then,
Hardness.

Now?
Now, I play with the devil,
Losing my faith,
Giving up my soul.


[This message has been edited by lorenlynn (02-02-2003 04:30 AM).]

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SPIRIT
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1 posted 2003-02-02 04:53 AM


This is good!
P.R.C
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since 2003-01-31
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Hull, England
2 posted 2003-02-02 11:21 AM


thats great, i like it
we'llfloat
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since 2003-01-23
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3 posted 2003-02-03 04:40 PM


I enjoyed this poem immensely.
lorenlynn
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since 2003-01-27
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California Beaches
4 posted 2003-02-08 11:32 PM


I appreciate your comments very much. Thank you.
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