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Dark Poetry #3

Nothing in Return

lorenlynn
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since 2003-01-27

Posts 203
California Beaches

0 posted 2003-01-29 06:42 PM

NOTHING IN RETURN

I let you quench your thirst,
I drowned your desire
And fed your hunger
Now!
Would you please go away.

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

1 posted 2003-01-30 05:05 PM

Interesting little piece. You seem to do the short writes very well.

lorenlynn
Member

since 2003-01-27

Posts 203
California Beaches

2 posted 2003-02-08 11:35 PM

Thank you, I really like doing 'shorties'.

cupcake
Member

since 2003-01-05

Posts 116

3 posted 2003-02-14 07:23 AM

Very short and to the point - interesting.

I'm a reader - not a writer.

cinnamongirl
Member

since 2003-02-02

Posts 217

4 posted 2003-02-17 12:53 PM

Wow. Something many wish they could say! I just hope I never hear this kind of thought heading in MY direction!

Great write!

Love,
Moca

lorenlynn
Member

since 2003-01-27

Posts 203
California Beaches

5 posted 2003-02-17 05:56 PM

Thank you for commenting.

Wisdom comes with winters. ** Oscar Wilde.

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