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Dark Poetry #3

Tommorow Made Me

sORE
New Member

since 2003-01-24

Posts 6
Toronto

0 posted 2003-01-29 12:04 PM

Days I felt like no more
days my mind, my existance felt sORE
those days and all the ones before
today those days are no more

Today has changed another page
edlesschapters read over again
infinite circles a crescendo of pain
choose to be today and feel the same

Is this real or in my head
have I saved me, am I dead
Have I made me a tommorow
or have I made me make my sorrow.

"ihateallofthosedays,allquestionsandpastways,
allhopeturnedtoblame,allididwassmudgeastain,sodeepitwouldn'twashaway,itwasn'tevenmine
nowhereitstays,itremindsmeofthosedays,thosedayswillnevergoaway!"

sORE

iMMuNe
Junior Member

since 2002-07-23

Posts 49
Maine, USA

1 posted 2003-01-30 06:32 PM

Nice write sORE, I liked it, and welcome to the forums

The only question I got is that little thing at the end thats quoted, could you explain?

[This message has been edited by iMMuNe (01-30-2003 06:33 PM).]

sORE
New Member

since 2003-01-24

Posts 6
Toronto

2 posted 2003-01-30 06:53 PM

It's supposed to signify muttered thoughts, random off the top of my head. No grammer, no thinking, just the writing of thoughts without even double checking.

To go with the above.

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

3 posted 2003-01-30 09:15 PM

Very interesting post and the 'muttering' on the bottom is quite effective ***certainly very different.

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