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Breaking Chords
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Breaking Chords |
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Eromyna Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306Pheonix, AZ, USA 
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I wrote this jointly with my friend, Zach Daniels, alternating each line. Our styles seem to meld seamlessly. ~*~ To the tune of fifty heartbeats, I drag myself away the strong pull of my conciousness will never let me stay Incognito resurrections, in a non-imposing way pair the strings of hidden stresses in a beautiful bouquet To believe and yet endeavour, to begin with lack and loss a tangled strain of undone bows, dragging me across And behind the shuttered windows, or inside the shattered frost lies the battle-worn music of panic-bathed exhaust To extents beyond comparison, in spite of opposition I'm the soul that's playing songs through the defeated musician Weaving controversy backwards, over patterns of attrition swaying branches, in the wind, never needed my permission But to contemplate confusion, I would dare to look ahead and the foggy paths in front of me will tentatively tread Finding thorns among the roses, condradicting what you said spinning circles of distraction, floating thoughts above my head Breaking chordes constructed endlessly, with overbearing tones crackled notes, harmonic sounds that i can feel run through my bones Searing clarity in motion through a wave of sinking stones it's the knowing ears that hear through the whispering and moans "I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation." |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
You certainly achieved a sense of unity here, hard to believe that it is written by two, you must both be on the same plain. It held my attention.  |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
wow it really is hard to tell tis written by two! I like this alot, its smooth flowing with cadence. and has a sweet and eerie paining messege! brilliant! Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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