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Ada'doLisdo'ti
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since 2002-12-10
Posts 123
California

0 posted 2003-01-23 04:08 PM


Day black as night,
Causing sudden fright.
Demons creep all around,
Listen and you here the sound.
Your frieght does inspire,
The Fallen Angels choir.
To sing an even louder course,
To show you evils brutal force.
To cause torment to you soul,
You give to them all control.
Haunting melody played by demon bands,
the time is close at hand.
A banshee wails the finale note,
Your soul is caught in your thoat.
You feel your death upon you,
Then you wake up the dream is through.
You look out the window what do you behold,
Somthing that freezes your mortal soul.
Day black as night....

Of all I've lost; I miss my innocence  the most.

© Copyright 2003 Albert D Lopez - All Rights Reserved
Eromyna
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since 2002-11-29
Posts 306
Pheonix, AZ, USA
1 posted 2003-01-24 04:15 PM


I like the lines, "A banshee wails the final note /Your soul is caught in your thraot."

"I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation."

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