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Dark Poetry #3

Arsenic Veins

alibaster
Member

since 2001-07-07

Posts 299
In my own private hell...(PA).

0 posted 2003-01-13 11:16 AM

Arsenic Veins

Arsenic flowing sweetly thru beautiful veins
and sliding tenderly over endearing pains.
Loving to despise
and laughing hysterically at shocking surprise.
Tearing down your cages of hypocritical walls
where you hide away the truth when your darkness calls.
Feeding the fire that lay beneath.
Tormenting daemons to awaken scratching and bleeding with bloodthirsty teeth.
Show me the real you, uninhibited, free and true.
Feed me your arsenic flowing sweetly thru beautiful veins
and slide tenderly over my endearing pains.

{ArsenicVeins@SpittingPoison.com}

"There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul."(C)alibaster

"If it doesn't bite, scratch and make you bleed its not worth it"(C)alibaster

[This message has been edited by alibaster (01-14-2003 12:04 PM).]

Darkness
Member

since 2002-10-17

Posts 202
The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies.

1 posted 2003-01-14 10:41 AM

This was really good I liked how you used some rhyming in this. It really gave the piece power. Your word usage gave a beutiful undertone to this.

Bien!Bien

Darkness

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