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Dark Poetry #3

let me go

Neala
Member

since 1999-08-21

Posts 262
Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-01-06 11:04 AM

Let me go
I want to be free
I don't want this
Life you put me in
I wnat somthing else
Even if
I had to make
It all myself

Let me go
I wnat to be free
I can fly free
From what you
Made for me
Cause I am sick
Of you supporting you
When you are the parent

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

1 posted 2003-01-06 07:19 PM

They can be hard to deal with sometimes, can't they?
I hope things between you and them settle a bit.. its not worth it to live everyday just wanting change. Though I know just saying be happy with all you have is much easier typed than done!

Just hang on, and keep writing, 'twas a good one.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

asphyxiation
New Member

since 2003-01-05

Posts 3
mesa, az

2 posted 2003-01-06 07:31 PM

tis pretty. i relate all too well. i hate being confined with no escape and with the havens dwindling down

breathe out so i can breathe you in

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

3 posted 2003-01-07 10:39 AM

Sad but well said. Use a spell checker if necessary and really read before you post for it is your autograph here, sign your name with pride. Life goes on in spite of us.

Neala
Member

since 1999-08-21

Posts 262
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-01-10 09:37 PM

Thank for replying I really appresate it...I know I can't spell...I use spell check but I never know which word is right....hehe

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