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Neala
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since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-01-06 11:04 AM



Let me go
I want to be free
I don't want this
Life you put me in
I wnat somthing else
Even if
I had to make
It all myself

Let me go
I wnat to be free
I can fly free
From what you
Made for me
Cause I am sick
Of you supporting you
When you are the parent

© Copyright 2003 Rachel Parrish - All Rights Reserved
GG
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since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532
Lost in thought
1 posted 2003-01-06 07:19 PM


They can be hard to deal with sometimes, can't they?
I hope things between you and them settle a bit.. its not worth it to live everyday just wanting change. Though I know just saying be happy with all you have is much easier typed than done!

Just hang on, and keep writing, 'twas a good one.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

asphyxiation
New Member
since 2003-01-05
Posts 3
mesa, az
2 posted 2003-01-06 07:31 PM



tis pretty. i relate all too well. i hate being confined with no escape and with the havens dwindling down

breathe out so i can breathe you in

SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745
California Desert
3 posted 2003-01-07 10:39 AM


Sad but well said. Use a spell checker if necessary and really read before you post for it is your autograph here, sign your name with pride. Life goes on in spite of us.

I am an enigma, even unto myself.
A puzzle unsolved, a mystery maybe until beyond death.  ┬ędas


Neala
Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA
4 posted 2003-01-10 09:37 PM


Thank for replying I really appresate it...I know I can't spell...I use spell check but I never know which word is right....hehe
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