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Dark Poetry #3
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leafseranade
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since 2001-07-06
Posts 118
Wisconsin, USA
0 posted 2003-01-05 11:00 PM

all i dream about
a way out
of gray winter
into
summer
warmth
encouragement
of a very life
i lose every day
that goes past
that the cold hand
masages my gums
and freezes my thoughts
decays my skin
this constant frost
no releif for
five long months
all i crave
escape to the green
house
heat lamp
a reminiscent
sun
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D edgar Grey
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since 2002-08-21
Posts 174
Hell...(aka Wisconsin)
1 posted 2003-01-05 11:23 PM

I liked this bit...definitely reminds me of how I feel right now. I especially liked the way you described winter and its effects on you...very vivid imagery.

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