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The one who dies with the most toys wins
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The one who dies with the most toys wins |
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just a junkie Member
since 2003-03-04
Posts 53 |
The one who dies with the most toys wins Basking in the incessant need To procure a bit more Than I require or deserve One of the first acts of Human nature Is greed based - long before speech or cognition Is attained An infant continues to suckle at the breast Long after the pangs of hunger Subside I will take more breaths Than I medically need to survive today As I did yesterday And you will do tomorrow The seven deadly sins are not a Ticket to a fiery hell More appropriately, they are the Blueprint and assurance That life will continue Long after I die With the most toys. Just a Junkie |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
I think this is my favorite of yours, nicely done. Jason |
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just a junkie Member
since 2003-03-04
Posts 53 |
Thanks Jason. I was actually thinking of working on it a little bit- maybe I will leave it alone. Just a Junkie |
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Flower Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 240California |
This is full of truth. Cannot get over how diversified all the writes are here, my first time here and I am impressed. I liked this. |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Very interesting, I liked. |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
More appropriately, they are the Blueprint and assurance That life will continue Long after I die With the most toys. That is sure the truth! Enjoyed this one. |
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