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Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas 
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The nights always went cold When my thoughts would lead to you You were evil and self-centered Yet you never had a clue The pain you caused to others The tears that shed each night Heartache was always there Plastered in my sight Yet you would turn and smile Not caring in the least Tearing into my soul Is how you would feast Feeding on my eyes And all I truly loved Taking away my breathe While floating from above Soon your day will come No more souls left to take Burning in the flames As we fling close the gate A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness. |
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Chameleon Member
since 2002-08-07
Posts 99Australia |
"Taking away my breathe While floating from above Soon your day will come No more souls left to take Burning in the flames As we fling close the gate" I like this part, the image of the gate was really good to finish with. however one thing, instead of titling it the time, I would've called it siphon kiss. [This message has been edited by Chameleon (11-14-2002 02:55 AM).] |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Great write! ~wranx |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...reminded me of my old self...James |
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