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skysandstars
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since 2002-10-30
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0 posted 2002-10-31 08:14 AM


You told them all so many lies,
They filled their heads with false hope and denial,
When you told her you loved her, you had something else in mind,
And when you pressed her lips and her yellow skin,
Nothing stopped you from breaking her smile,

How long can you go on like this?
How many hearts does it take?
Will you ever realize the damage you've done?
For you can never put the pieces back together,
Once they're undone

And when you come home, yes, you lock the front door,
That's the only security you get, shutting out the world,
You have five messages on the machine, from five different girls,
All asking where have you been? Why haven't you returned their calls?
And you cry, you cry, because now you realize,
All this pain you've caused, will never mean that much to you,

While in the bed, you smell her dress,
It smells new, somewhat beautiful,
You've told yourself she is the last one,
But something else signals it isn't,
When she's about to leave, you tell her you love her,
And that you'll call her,
But her eyes are red,they're far too honest,
And she knows what you truly mean

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ashley
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since 2002-10-31
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1 posted 2002-10-31 01:43 PM


This was a very sensual poem of how some people feel and it was written very uniquely. I thought it was very good.
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