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...Peacefully Away...
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...Peacefully Away... |
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!!! Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 137VA (U.S.A) |
The quiet pitter-patter of the rains, During this cold, and dreary day. The soft sounds of cars cruising water-soaked lanes... Through it all i sleep peacefully away. The white sky becomes heavy with clouds of gray, As soft, raindrops relentlessly pound the ground. Inside, on my couch, i sleep the day away To the lullaby outside that plays it's cold, rainy sound. The wind blows cold along the wet, icy ground Under the sky, with it's many shades of gray. As the droplets of rain tumble endlessly down... Through it all i sleep.....peacefully away. |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Great poetry. I really enjoyed the simplicity of it. Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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Baby G Junior Member
since 2001-01-28
Posts 39Australia |
Most people say how the rain makes them feel safe and warm inside their house, and they sleep really well listening to it...me?? I must be weird it keeps me awake hahaha. But anywho great poem! |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
I adored this  Know the feeling... thanks for sharing Take care.~ Tara ~ may you live all the days of your life. -- jonathan swift |
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!!! Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 137VA (U.S.A) |
Xenox- Thank you for the comment. Once again, im going by that quote "Less is more".I have found that to be very helpful in my poems. Baby G- Ahhh, dont worry about it. If it keeps ya awake, it doesnt make you wierd. And me, i prefer to feel nice, and cool when i sleep in, or when its raining outside. i like rain, because then it gets somewhat cool, or cold ouside Taramw- Im glad you enjoyed it so. It was a pleasure to share. Thanks for reading. |
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Swamp¤Faeryie Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393fairyland....of course;) |
i loved this,it was very calm and kind of whisperey....it's grey and raining today outside,i considered sleeping all day also... loved this poem,it's very well written....swamp Do i contradict myself?Very well i contradict myself.I contain multitudes.~walt whitman |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
i really liked this, it was beautifully written and so simple  "I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN "There is no always forever, just this"-the cure |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
So nice and peaceful, almost hypnotic with its drowsy softness...like a warm float... Very nice! Lary |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
I enjoyed it too. Feeling a connection or familiarity in it. Well written With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Temptress*Moon Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 240Long Island, NY |
Loving this write*S* Great work here Temptress*Moon I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH- |
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!!! Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 137VA (U.S.A) |
Swamp Faeryie- Thanx for readin my poem. I had WANTED to sleep in today, cuz it was rainin too, but i had to go to class. Pity. Ginners- Im glad you enjoyed it. I didnt want to stretch it out, and besides, it was 2 in the morning already when i had finished. Not that it mattered to me... Laryalee- Thanx for reading. Basically, i just wrote whatever came to my mind, from my heart. Dragonpoe- Glad you enjoyed it, and were able to identify with it. Temptress Moon- Thanx for reading, and its great that you enjoyed the read. |
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