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devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

0 posted 2002-10-29 10:06 PM

I ride your wings of essence-
through thunder stricken storms...
I cry the wanting primitive-
When light strikes dark forlorn...

Do I need-
I want to be?
A bold suffice
of felinity?
A smooth caress-
of winter breeze?
The melting agent-
to your freeze?

Deliberation feeds on need
(so honestly I beg to be)
a silhouette upon your knee
To stifle slow the constant bleed...

To hold you warm and settled-
beneath cracked thunder and the storm...
To challenge high and mighty-
Within the cosmic path you’ve worn...

Feel me now within yourself-
the steady to your sway...
Gather up the shattered glass-
Embrace the passageway...

Embrace
the need
to stay.

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2002-10-30 04:33 AM

I really enjoyed this and your style of writing, and found as it went along a passage way to hope. Nicely done.

A smile costs nothing but makes someone rich.

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

2 posted 2002-10-30 04:43 AM

deTanya,
Where have you BEEN, woman?

We are missing these devinities, or would that be devinettas.

"Hello, 911?"
"HELLLOOOO oooo?"

*click*
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm......

~Ed

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

3 posted 2002-10-30 08:29 AM

"The need to stay."

This is a need that sometimes, cannot be ignored.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

4 posted 2002-10-31 12:11 PM

yes
catwoman
your silhouette
doors this Dark
all too
rare
these busy days

this plea.....
purrrrrsss
imploringly
b

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

5 posted 2002-11-03 09:46 PM

Well, I'd like to see this closer to the top.

I LOVE this, Lady.

"two hearts will build the foundation for one point of light
a duet done with passion"

excerpt from "I Love You"

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

6 posted 2002-11-27 06:53 PM

Another Awesome write!

Maybe all one can do is hope to end up with the right regrets. ~Arthur Miller

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

7 posted 2002-11-28 01:21 PM

I really really like this. I haven't read your work before, but I will definately be keeping my eye out for more of you

No, on second thought, let's not go to Camelot.
~ Arthur (Monty Python Search for the Holy Grail)
I'm Rhondiforous!

PoeticJustice
Junior Member

since 2002-11-29

Posts 44
AK, USA

8 posted 2002-11-29 05:04 AM

Nice! I like the writing style, it's very unique and breaks away from the norm.

Ethan Halo
Senior Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 793
on the roof again

9 posted 2002-12-01 02:29 AM

a dark bedroom lit by fireligt,
raging storm outside,
a need to go and a need to stay...
you paint a vibrant scene of longing, lust, darkness, and steaminess

greetings from a certain midnight son, as well.
glad to see you still writing passionately... and with the same semantic diversity (great SAT bustin vocab as always!)

enjoyed this mood-filled painting.

it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown

[This message has been edited by Ethan Halo (12-01-2002 02:30 AM).]

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

10 posted 2002-12-18 12:26 PM

You feed him lightning, here.

Miss ya!

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