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Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

0 posted 2003-02-07 04:58 PM

A silence so pure,it beckons to me
It promises endings and finally free
It brings with it comfort
Never questioning me
Would it truly bring peace?
To bring silence to me?

WisprWnd
Junior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 34

1 posted 2003-02-07 09:05 PM

Yes I believe,
In your silence.
Would you given half the chance,
Throw it away?

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

2 posted 2003-02-15 08:25 PM

I like the ring and flow to this...

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

3 posted 2003-02-15 09:34 PM

thx for your comments and kind of you to bring my very first post back.

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

4 posted 2003-02-16 01:01 PM

I really like the flow this has...nice job

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

5 posted 2003-02-16 04:45 PM

Welcome to passions. I am sure you will enjoy our diverse poetry and discussion. If you have any questions please do not hesitate to contact any of the moderators.

Write on!

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

[This message has been edited by majnu (02-16-2003 04:46 PM).]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2003-02-16 05:03 PM

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Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

7 posted 2003-02-16 06:52 PM

Very pleasant post. Nice!

SweetSerenity
Member

since 2003-02-16

Posts 52
Canada

8 posted 2003-02-17 10:15 AM

I liked the flow of the poem too.
Very nice.

~A touch of Sweetness . . . . . A lifetime of Serenity~

cinnamongirl
Member

since 2003-02-02

Posts 217

9 posted 2003-02-17 12:42 PM

Bittersweet longing to know the answers... find yourself in the silence... and your fingers will graze upon the Truth. The silence is within you; explore...

Beautiful write... I know well the feeling you convey within.

Love,
Moca

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

10 posted 2003-03-02 10:19 AM

this does have a smooth flow.. and a deep yet light question... I like it.
good to see your first post.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

JP
Senior Member

since 1999-05-25

Posts 1343
Loomis, CA

11 posted 2003-03-03 12:11 PM

peace....

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
Nil Desperandum, Fata viem invenient

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